annericelover Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Hello everyone, I thought I'd share the link to my Journal on Rotten Tomatoes, which features several film reviews, please comment and tell me your opinions in my journal: ROTTEN TOMATOES: http://www.rottentomatoes.com/vine/journal...ournalid=594151 Here's the link to my DVD Collection: http://www.dvdspot.com/member=annericelover Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuaveStar Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Hello everyone, I thought I'd share the link to my Journal on Rotten Tomatoes, which features several film reviews, please comment and tell me your opinions in my journal: ROTTEN TOMATOES: http://www.rottentomatoes.com/vine/journal...ournalid=594151 Here's the link to my DVD Collection: http://www.dvdspot.com/member=annericelover Read your reviews and they are good. Just a few things, first don't use acronyms like OMG or LOL just say you found the thing funny or it was very interesting so it sounds more professional. Also I'm going to tell you what my journalism teacher told me last November-Don't put anything in brackets while writing. If you can't say what you want to say without using brackets then it isn't needed in your article. Super boy-"I have the series as part of a fan made set, so I have access to every episode. Its sad too, because the series, showed promise, it just needed more time to catch its audience. With WB now owning New Line Cinema there are renewed hopes that WB's will release the series on DVD, but the WB has said they don't see enough fan request or that not many even know about the series. I'm glad to have the series, but right now most episodes can be seen on AOL Video website and a few episodes not featured on there can be seen on You tube." Instead of repeating the fact that you have it as a fan made set, just say that once that you are reviewing them from a fan made set, and then at the end of your article say that they can bought from eBay or viewed online, separate from your main article. Well that's all i have to say, i really enjoyed reading your reviews and you might have a valid point behind the things i critiqued. However, i do recommend that you take my advice on the no brackets thing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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